After watching the trailer, I see a lot of promise here, but I also think there’s a lot that can be pushed. I think the final product could benefit from a layering of clips from this scene interspersed between clips of other scenes from the show. It would build tension and give the viewer an… Continue reading “Dorothy” Trailer Feedback
Author: ilyasmerza
I'm a queer fiction writer living in Hudson Valley, NY, who has a deep passion for telling stories about people on the margins of society for those to see themselves in. My favorite genres to write in are horror, mystery, fantasy, and drama. I like to take the grounded elements of real life and elevate them into something strange, whimsical, or terrible.